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Chapter 160: Shahin

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Lyn Thorne-Alder

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Chapter 160: Shahin

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Thu Jan 12, 2012 2:50 am

Rix

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Re: Chapter 160: Shahin

The joys of making it all come together.

Shahin, if your aunts get on with the professors like a house on fire, have you considered the possibility of cousins?

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Thu Jan 12, 2012 7:50 am

Gudy

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Re: Chapter 160: Shahin


	Quote: "It has to be. It's us."

And now I'm all apprehensive. Thanks a lot! ;-)


	Quote: ??????

This space intentionally left blank?

"Emrys, she knew was joking." This feels like it needs a second comma after "knew", but I'm not entirely sure.

Thu Jan 12, 2012 8:28 am

Lyn Thorne-Alder

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Re: Chapter 160: Shahin


	Rix wrote: The joys of making it all come together. Shahin, if your aunts get on with the professors like a house on fire, have you considered the possibility of cousins?

*giggle* Oh, dear. Coming to school with baby Arthur is his mother's aunt's child by... Mmmm... Reid? I'd like that.

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Thu Jan 12, 2012 1:20 pm

Lyn Thorne-Alder

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Re: Chapter 160: Shahin

Gudy wrote:


	Quote: "It has to be. It's us."

And now I'm all apprehensive. Thanks a lot! ;-)

*evil grin*

Gudy wrote:


	Quote: ??????

This space intentionally left blank?

I'll check that one out tonight. We may have missed something.


	Gudy wrote: "Emrys, she knew was joking." This feels like it needs a second comma after "knew", but I'm not entirely sure.

I read it with the emphasis on knew, so no comma needed.

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Thu Jan 12, 2012 1:25 pm

Rix

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	Quote: giggle Oh, dear. Coming to school with baby Arthur is his mother's aunt's child by... Mmmm... Reid? I'd like that.

What have I done to the universe, what have I done?

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Fri Jan 13, 2012 7:44 am

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