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Oh man, hope we get to see the Kai/Conrad/Tolly convo in the next round, if their bit isn't interrupted by Caspian.

That aside, OH SHIT DRAGON.

And things were going so well for once.... ;-)

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That was so well done. I think that is the first time I've had that setup (someone sees something over PoV's shoulder, PoV turns around, sees thing) where on step 3 I have actually semi-flipped out because I TOTALLY WASN'T EXPECTING IT.

Of course I feel kind of dumb for not expecting it because I mean we know a dragon is wandering the halls but... yeah. Also, the description of Caspian was great.

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But did we expect Caspian to come out of hiding with a hunting war party on his trail?
(And was that the equivalent of kidnapping a princess?)

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OH SHIT DRAGON.

That seems like a fair summary of this chapter, yes. :-)

I'm not sure quite what to think of Tolly, though. I mean, true, within the Addergoole framework, knowingly offering yourself up to be Owned is pretty much the most extreme form of asking for forgiveness/trying to make things better that you can do. But still, I'd have liked him more if he had asked Kailani what she wants/needs/requires of him.

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capriox wrote:
Oh man, hope we get to see the Kai/Conrad/Tolly convo in the next round, if their bit isn't interrupted by Caspian.
YES!


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Rix wrote:
But did we expect Caspian to come out of hiding with a hunting war party on his trail?
(And was that the equivalent of kidnapping a princess?)

Aw dammit now I'm thinking of Caspian as Bowser. Why does Addergoole-related stuff keep reminding me of Bowser lately?! xD

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Meep, dragon.

That is all.

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That wasn't actually all.

So, Tolly is a dork. A Luke-mentored, old-fashioned, knights and princesses and honor dork. I officially like him and think he is adorkable.

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A Luke-mentored, old-fashioned, knights and princesses and honor dork


He even used the old-fashioned ceremonial phrasing... which he learned from Luke. :)


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Gudy wrote:
I'm not sure quite what to think of Tolly, though. I mean, true, within the Addergoole framework, knowingly offering yourself up to be Owned is pretty much the most extreme form of asking for forgiveness/trying to make things better that you can do. But still, I'd have liked him more if he had asked Kailani what she wants/needs/requires of him.


Exactly my thoughts. But I have to say I do tend towards forgiving him. You know, as a reader whose opinion wouldn't matter to the protagonists and thus couldn't re-victimise anyone if stated. :roll:


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