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This is going to be interesting. The defense, as Emrys says, should be simple enough - but since when is anything simple?

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Emrys needs more punishment. Unbelievable, that guy.

Edit: Or maybe, he just needs a "What the fuck is wrong with you"-speech. But I'm voting for punishment, because it sounds like more fun.


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I'm looking forward to Shahin's confrontation with Agatha. I expect she's still very much underestimating the little shitball - she has no idea of the rape of Kai being arranged as she speaks, for one - but I'm glad someone is gonna at least try.

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I can't say this one made me like Shahin very much, but I've been leaning away from liking her for a while.

She was exceedingly cute with Joff, though, I must say.

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I think that if anyone can stand up against Agatha, Shahin is it.

I mean, Agatha's primary weapon is emotional manipulation. And Shahin is the master of emotional control.

And I SOO want to see that play out. :D

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I'm perhaps too far into Shahin's head; I've gotten the "dislike Shahin" comment off this chapter in beta and tried to soften the sections that seemed to do it... so what colours it for you? Why does this chapter make you like her less?

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I just think she was off her game.

She'd been punched in the nose, knocked out, discovered that she was accountable for her kept setting her assailant on fire.

Nobody would be at their best.

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Her boyfriend almost kills someone and her reaction is 'how do I avoid getting in trouble for this,' not 'I'm sorry, Taro, what can I/my boyfriend do to make up for almost killing you?' She only starts helping after it becomes expedient to help because she wants to impress Caitrin with being a good girl, she doesn't smack Emrys for planning to taking advantage of Taro at the end there, she kisses him.

I mean, I shouldn't expect anything else, she's D&D true neutral, but that doesn't mean I have to like her for it. I didn't like her deal with Phelen either.

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Maybe it just shows how much I hate Taro but I think he deserved getting set on fire. And frankly you're asking her to care that her boyfriend hurt the guy who punched her. Maybe she will when she's less angry about the whole situation. Right now it probably looks like "Wait a sec I'm being held responsible for something that happened while I was unconscious?"

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