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Lyn Thorne-Alder
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 Bonus story: Carrot and Stick It's been pointed out to me that this is probably part two of a three-part series. I encourage voting for part three so I can figure out what it is  ~!Lyn
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Re: Bonus story: Carrot and Stick I think you forgot something. "He didn’t think [name] had given her time to get all her ID’s together"
(I do that when writing, too!)
***EDIT: While I've got it sitting there; it should also be IDs, I believe.
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Wysteria
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Re: Bonus story: Carrot and Stick Since I don't feel the need to worry about fairness, equality or health in relationships, when it comes to Caspian, I can feel free to find that very hot, right?
Caspian is awesome. Seeing him be a Devourer is awesome. Everything about this story is awesome.
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Lyn Thorne-Alder
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Re: Bonus story: Carrot and Stick Man! I *looked* for that, too, and I couldn't find it! (Why I didn't use Find, I don't know) Thanks, X! Lyn
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Re: Bonus story: Carrot and Stick
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guesty
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Re: Bonus story: Carrot and Stick I'm surprised, but I wholeheartedly agree on the hotness. And I want to find out dog-girl's story.
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Wysteria
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Re: Bonus story: Carrot and Stick I wonder whether Daeva need to eat if they get lots of emotional energy, or if the energy substitutes for food. Magical energy in general seems to be interchangeable with physical energy (see, Shahin getting tired after her first magic lesson). I'm just wondering if the mundane equivalent is sugar, caffeine or some sort of more serious upper drug. The metaphor used is generally 'eating,' but I wonder if the equivalency goes further than metaphor.
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Elasmo
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Re: Bonus story: Carrot and Stick It may help, but it can't substitute completely or forever.
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