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I really enjoy the Thorne girls. They strike of as one of the most honest sets of folks we've met so far, moreso than any of our heroes' friends. Not nice-honest, but honest.

Is she going to have a meeting with Regine soon, or was it skimmed over? I'm refering to this passage from Chapter 20. "Kailani had returned to Regine’s office and accepted her invitation to be her Mentor. Regine’s answer had been a curt, unsurprised nod, and a meeting scheduled for Monday evening. She had promised Kailani answers. She intended to go to the meeting prepared with questions."

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Is she going to have a meeting with Regine soon, or was it skimmed over? I'm referring to this passage from Chapter 20. "Kailani had returned to Regine’s office and accepted her invitation to be her Mentor. Regine’s answer had been a curt, unsurprised nod, and a meeting scheduled for Monday evening. She had promised Kailani answers. She intended to go to the meeting prepared with questions."


Hunh.... whoops! Thanks for catching that. I'll have to figure out what to do with that now!

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Good catch indeed!

I also like the Thorne Girls for their honesty. But I keep wondering if they are the three blond girls who attacked Kai in the first book, or if that was a different group who is still out there harassing students and we just don't hear about them.

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I also like the Thorne Girls for their honesty. But I keep wondering if they are the three blond girls who attacked Kai in the first book, or if that was a different group who is still out there harassing students and we just don't hear about them.


They're the same group.:

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"Move," the girl demanded again, but she wasn't talking to Kai.

"Leave her alone, Acacia."


Though I'm not sure where everyone (not just you!) is getting the impression that they're blonde.


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Though I'm not sure where everyone (not just you!) is getting the impression that they're blonde.


Because you called Acacia blonde when Kylie first met her (2/2/2009), when she was picking on Joff in Biology. I believe Sima is a brunette, and Allyse's initial description at least didn't say.


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Okay, that explains why you think she's blonde. Though I have no idea why I did that.

We'll call Allyse a brunette, too, otherwise we have the Charlie's Angels of Addergoole.

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I'm looking forward to more Thorne girls. I enjoy their attitudes, even if they do come across as bullies.

"Then again, she didn’t seem to the sort to be intimidated by anything."

I believe you're missing a "be" between "to" and "the sort". Possibly?

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I'm looking forward to more Thorne girls. I enjoy their attitudes, even if they do come across as bullies.


*grins* They are bullies, so I'm glad they come across that way.

heidicautrell wrote:
"Then again, she didn’t seem to the sort to be intimidated by anything."

I believe you're missing a "be" between "to" and "the sort". Possibly?


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The stereotype of high school female bullies are blonds. That's probably why the blond thing happened.

Of course, describing her as blond did help...

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