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Discuss the story here :-)

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I'm happy to see this one up, but you know that.

Pretty horrible way to start one's day, and one's story. And a geas too, no less.

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Ooh! This one is off to a very good start. Good for the readers that is. It's a pretty bad start for the characters.

Oh and I think I found a typo.

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The horns were a give-away, of course, twisting back along his skill


Should be 'back along his skull' I think?

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ive had worse days.

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And I thought Addergoole was dark. :shock:
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Heh. Yeah, I know the feeling. This one started up after Addergoole, and it's definitely a different tone.

It's good though.

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Second chapter!

They have a lead.

But I'd be scared too, with those two on my tail.

The writing in this is much more... visceral than in Addergoole. Smell and taste are much more intense.

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A formatting issue...

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“You ran,” Nathanial rumbled, smiling down at the top of her head. “Thank you.” “I... oh.” Fenn watched the comprehension pass across her face, and slide down her body as relaxation.


Should be two paragraphs right?

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Ooooo, prophecies. About people whose names we do not know. One hopes that is useful for someone.

I like the woods witch. Her cabin sounds cozy.

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"I like the woods witch. Her cabin sounds cozy."

it is

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