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Lyn Thorne-Alder
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Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 6:03 pm Posts: 13626
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 Chapter 16
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| Sun May 01, 2011 2:04 am |
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Rix
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Joined: Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:06 am Posts: 378
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 Re: Chapter 16
cy'Spike and not cy'Fenn.
Is there a rule onhow the Mentor's name is used or is it Mentor's choice?
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| Sun May 01, 2011 3:19 am |
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Lyn Thorne-Alder
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 Re: Chapter 16
I think more of a loose guideline. The Teachers in Addergoole are sort of an odd case, since they're using names that are part their birth-name and part their Name.
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| Sun May 01, 2011 3:32 am |
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Rix
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 Re: Chapter 16
Interesting thought - would cy'Fridmar be different to cy'Storm Wolf?
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Clare K. R. Miller
demigod
Joined: Tue Sep 08, 2009 2:46 am Posts: 2096
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 Re: Chapter 16
I like where this is going very very much. I had no idea that Names could be changed.
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Lyn Thorne-Alder
The Author
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I'm not sure. I think that's more of a hole in my worldbuilding. :-/
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Eseme
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Joined: Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:29 am Posts: 578
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 Re: Chapter 16
I like this turn of events, Fenny becoming a mentor. A very scary mentor, but a mentor.
I'll be very interested to see what her teaching is like, and how well it suits her students. SHe and Moira seem quite different, for one, and while Toy used to be a hunter and Fenn is a hunter now, I'm not sure she wants to teach that sort of skill.
Also, the camping cave is still excellent!
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| Mon May 02, 2011 2:20 am |
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Really thought this last chapter helped readers connect more with the characters [before, the long pause between chapters and the less easily approachable storylines made it more difficult to get to know people, methinks].
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giom
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 Re: Chapter 16
I like the way we learn more and more about Fenny and I look forward to seeing more of the relationship between her, Toy and Moira... I'm also interested to see how things progress with Nathaniel and his fight against the old man... Please continue with the Wild Ones' blood  By the way the link on http://addergoole.com/Current.html points to http://lyn.thorne-alder.info/blood (which is blocked in China where I live) whereas the forum posts link to http://addergoole.com/lyn/blood/16.htmlAlso, right now http://addergoole.com/lyn/blood/Current.html is the chapter 15 instead of the chapter 16...
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Kunama
Third Cohort
Joined: Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:51 pm Posts: 58
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Yay for more of this. I'd despaired of ever seeing more, the main page has said the latest chapter is Run for so long. only to bind HER to himself
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