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Narrative break - Something is missing.

"He flinched, and shook his head slowly. “She had to punish me. I did something wrong.” His face turned towards the fire, and he fell quiet.

in his wrists. Fifteen years. And an Ellehemaei body could heal almost anything. “That’s not fair!” "

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Narrative break - Something is missing.

"He flinched, and shook his head slowly. “She had to punish me. I did something wrong.” His face turned towards the fire, and he fell quiet.

in his wrists. Fifteen years. And an Ellehemaei body could heal almost anything. “That’s not fair!” "


Fixed. "in his wrists. Fifteen years. And an Ellehemaei body could heal almost anything." went down lower.

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I like their camp. Making a tent out of a rock is a good idea.

The image of Moira surrounded by woodland friends was hilarious.

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