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Topic review - Chapter 160: Shahin
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Rix
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 7:44 am
Re: Chapter 160: Shahin
What have I done to the universe, what have I done?
[quote]*giggle* Oh, dear. Coming to school with baby Arthur is his mother's aunt's child by... Mmmm... Reid? I'd like that.[/quote]
What have I done to the universe, what have I done?
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Lyn Thorne-Alder
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 1:25 pm
Re: Chapter 160: Shahin
*evil grin* I'll check that one out tonight. We may have missed something. I read it with the emphasis on knew, so no comma needed.
[quote="Gudy"][quote]"It has to be. It's us." [/quote] And now I'm all apprehensive. Thanks a lot! ;-)[/quote]
*evil grin*
[quote="Gudy"][quote]??????[/quote] This space intentionally left blank?[/quote]
I'll check that one out tonight. We may have missed something. [quote="Gudy"] "Emrys, she knew was joking." This feels like it needs a second comma after "knew", but I'm not entirely sure.[/quote]
I read it with the emphasis on [i]knew,[/i] so no comma needed.
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Lyn Thorne-Alder
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 1:20 pm
Re: Chapter 160: Shahin
*giggle* Oh, dear. Coming to school with baby Arthur is his mother's aunt's child by... Mmmm... Reid? I'd like that.
[quote="Rix"]The joys of making it all come together.
Shahin, if your aunts get on with the professors like a house on fire, have you considered the possibility of cousins?[/quote]
*giggle* Oh, dear. Coming to school with baby Arthur is his mother's aunt's child by... Mmmm... Reid? I'd like that.
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Gudy
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 8:28 am
Re: Chapter 160: Shahin
And now I'm all apprehensive. Thanks a lot!  This space intentionally left blank? "Emrys, she knew was joking." This feels like it needs a second comma after "knew", but I'm not entirely sure.
[quote]"It has to be. It's us." [/quote] And now I'm all apprehensive. Thanks a lot! ;-)
[quote]??????[/quote] This space intentionally left blank?
"Emrys, she knew was joking." This feels like it needs a second comma after "knew", but I'm not entirely sure.
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Rix
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 7:50 am
Re: Chapter 160: Shahin
The joys of making it all come together.
Shahin, if your aunts get on with the professors like a house on fire, have you considered the possibility of cousins?
The joys of making it all come together.
Shahin, if your aunts get on with the professors like a house on fire, have you considered the possibility of cousins?
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Lyn Thorne-Alder
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 2:50 am
Chapter 160: Shahin
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